Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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Your Original Email

What’s up?
I just made an incredible discussion.
What’s that?
I’m gonna go to Kenya next winter.
Amazing! Can I go with you?
No I’m going to be there for one year as a volunteer to support a World Health Organization’s project.
Really? Is Jenny on the same page?
No. Actually lately our relationship is on the rocks. I think it’s better to walk away for a while. This January I heard a news which said that the WHO will test an experimental malaria vaccine on more then 750,000 children in Kenya,Malawi and Ghana next year and they started to recruit volunteers to support this project.
So you submitted application?
Yes and I passed it.
Bravo. I’ve never heard of this Malaria thing before. Could you please fill me in on more information about it?
Sure. This disease causes more than 400,000 deaths annually. How the vaccine is implemented is key to its success: it must be administered four times, with the final dose 18 months after the third.
I can’t wait to visit you. Since you mean it, I’m with you. Let me know your address after you settle down.

Your Edited Email

What’s up?
I just made an incredible decision.
What’s that?
I’m gonna go to Kenya next winter.
Amazing! Can I go with you?
No I’m going to be there for one year as a volunteer to support a World Health Organization’s project.
Really? Is Jenny on the same page?
No. Actually lately our relationship is / has been on the rocks. I think it’s better to walk away from it / to take some time for ourselves for a while. This January I heard some news which said that the WHO will test an experimental malaria vaccine on more then 750,000 children in Kenya, Malawi and Ghana next year and they have started to recruit volunteers to support this project.
So you submitted an application?
Yes and they accepted it.
Bravo. I’ve have never heard of this Malaria thing before. Could you please fill me in ?
Sure. This disease causes more than 400,000 deaths annually. How the vaccine is implemented is key to its success: it must be administered four times, with the final dose being given 18 months after the third.
I can’t wait to visit you. Since you mean it / you’re serious about it, I’m with you. Let me know your address after you settle down.