Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

As a watersports lover, I am happily living in Hongkong. Finally, I found someone who wants to go to the ocean park water wonderland with me. The two of us were both excited about all the rides yet also afraid of them. When we arrived at the entrance, security reminded us that our tickets were expired because I thought we had bought the flexible date ticket, yet we purchased one set day pass. What a pity, we wasted 1000 HK dollars. Knowing it was a sunk cost, we spent 1 min buying two new tickets and happily went into the wonderland. It is an extraordinary wonderland, and the two of us were so amazed by all of the rides that we spent about half hour aligning and figuring out which item to be the first one to start. It was pretty funny that we talked a lot with the guidance ladies about each item and found most of them were too frightening for us to go. Ultimately, we tried 3 or 4 things that brought us great joy and excitement. We are excited enough by merely visiting the place, enjoying the beautiful scenery, and understanding how the items work. The HK government spent hundreds of millions on this project, so we think it’s worth visiting and donating some money to this project. What a lovely summer in HK.

Your Edited Email

As a watersports lover, I am happily living in Hongkong. Finally, I found someone who wants to go to the ocean park / water amusement park water wonderland with me. The two of us were both excited about all the rides yet also afraid of them / but a bit hesitant / apprehensive too. When we arrived at the entrance, security reminded us that our tickets had expired because I thought we had bought the flexible date tickets, yet we purchased one set day passes. What a pity, we wasted 1000 HK dollars. Knowing it was a sunk cost, we spent 1 min buying two new tickets and happily went into the wonderland / amusement park. It is an extraordinary wonderland, and the two of us were so amazed by all of the rides that we spent about half hour aligning and figuring out which item to be the first one to start with. It was pretty funny that we talked a lot with the guidance ladies about each one and found most of them were too frightening for us to go on. Ultimately, we tried 3 or 4 things that / which brought us great joy and excitement. We were excited enough by merely visiting the place, enjoying the beautiful scenery, and understanding how the rides work. The HK government spent hundreds of millions on this project, so we think it’s worth visiting and donating some money to this project. What a lovely summer in HK.