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it would be appreciate if you could help me to correct below: many thanks

There is significant sales volume and market penetration gap between our electric car product and the products from the Chines new startups and Tesla, what are the main causes? and how can we minimize the gap

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it would be appreciative if you could help me to correct the below: many thanks

There is a significant sales volume and market penetration gap between our electric car products and the products from both the Chinese new startups, and Tesla. What are the main causes? And how can we minimize the gap?