Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

I woke up at 8 o’clock and then I started cooking for breakfast.

I went to the school because I needed to print some documents. After that, I decided to go to the supermarket which I bought some food for the next few days.

I made a plane for tomorrow when I back to my accommodation. I will go to the bank tomorrow.

I watched a movice that is learn any language in 6 months and the speaker said that you can not study very well when you are not happy or you have some emotional problems. YES, I agree with this opinion.

Your Edited Email

I woke up at 8 o’clock and then I started cooking for breakfast.

I went to the school because I needed to print some documents. After that, I decided to go to the supermarket where I bought some food for the next few days.

I made a plan for tomorrow when I got back to my accommodation. I will go to the bank tomorrow. / I made a plan for tomorrow when I got back home which was to go to the bank.

I watched a movie that was about how to learn any language in 6 months and the speaker said that you can not study very well if you are not happy or you have some emotional problems. YES, I agree with this opinion. – haha me too!!