Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

I’m done.

J: Mary, all things considered, I decided to major in business administration.
M: You, my fiancé , decided to go to college again? Do you remember we need raise money to have our baby next year? I’m done.
J: I think I’m into business.
M: What do you do for a living? Nothing. I’m the one taking the heavy lift. We are done.
J: What about selling out one of your apartments? It worth a fortune! We still can have a baby at the same time.
M: You wish. Please count me out. I’m not gonna do anything together with you, not getting married with you, not having a baby with you.
J: Have you got any problem with me?
M: Yes, you selfish worm. Good bye!

Your Edited Email

I’m done.

J: Mary, all things considered, I have decided to major in business administration.
M: You, my fiancé , have decided to go back to college? Do you remember we need to raise money to have our baby next year? I’m done.
J: I think I’m into business.
M: What do you do for a living? Nothing. I’m the one doing the heavy lifting. We are done.
J: What about selling one of your apartments? It‘s worth a fortune! We still can have a baby at the same time.
M: You wish. Please count me out. I’m not gonna do anything with you, not get married with you, not have a baby with you.
J: Have you got a problem with me?
M: Yes, you selfish worm. Good bye!