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Your Original Email


Top 20 pharmaceutical company is looking for a KA Leader for their Aesthetic BU. The detail requirements is as below,

5 plus years of consulting or central marketing working experience in top global company.
Strong ability in marketing analysis and overall.
Build up operating model and set up strategic development for wholly team.
MBA’s degree or above is must be.
Strong organizational ability, communication skill and team management.
Self controller and problem solver.

Welcome to contact me if you are interested in this job or you want to referral anyone.

Your Edited Email


Top 20 pharmaceutical company is looking for a KA Leader for their Aesthetic BU. The detailed requirements is as are below:

  • 5 plus years of consulting or central marketing working experience in a top global company.
  • Strong ability Experienced in marketing analysis and overall.
  • Build up operating model and set up strategic development for wholly team.
  • MBA‘s degree or above is a must be.
  • Strong organizational ability skills,
  • Good communication skills and team management.
  • Self controller Can work individually and should be a good problem solver.

    Your welcome to contact me if you are interested in this position or you want to referral anyone someone.


Not sure what you mean by ‘self controller’.


Final Version for you

Top 20 pharmaceutical company is looking for a KA Leader for their Aesthetic BU. The detailed requirements is as are below:

  • 5 plus years of consulting or central marketing working experience in a top global company
  • Experienced in marketing analysis
  • Build up operating model and set up strategic development for wholly team.
  • MBA degree or above is a must
  • Strong organizational skills
  • Good communication skills and team management.
  • Can work individually and should be a good problem solver.

Your welcome to contact me if you are interested in this position or you want to refer someone.