Email Service Notes (Jacob)

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Dear all

Today I inspected at Xinmen city spark main factory, this factory have produced about 16000pcs sakki bags and have packed 6000pcs into mater cartons, about 4000pcs backpacks, all backpacks have not been packed into master carton yet.

Sakki bag: 1, found master caton actual GW is big different from the shipping mark, factory will correct the shipping mark(stick a sticker on shipping mark)
2, rub test for the pack words found the first time testing the words will peel off a few gold colour.

Backpak: 1, found bags with uncut thread, dirty, sewing defects, have asked factory to check them carefully again before packing into master carton
2, found rain covers with ugly joint, holes, have asked factory to check them carefully again before packing into master carton

In additon, I found the webbing joining way at main factory is better than branch, have asked their branch also to use this way.

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Dear all

Today I inspected at theĀ Xinmen city spark main factory, this factory have hasĀ produced about 16000pcs sakki bags and have packed 6000pcs into mater cartons, about 4000pcs backpacks, all backpacks have notĀ yet been packed into theĀ master carton yet.

Sakki bag: 1, found that theĀ master carton‘s actualĀ GWĀ has a big difference from the shipping mark, theĀ factory will correct the shipping mark (stick a sticker on theĀ shipping mark)
2, rub test for the pack words found the first time testing the words would peel off a few gold colors.

Backpak: 1, found bags with uncut thread, dirty, sewing defects, have asked theĀ factory to check them carefully again before packing into theĀ master carton
2, found rain covers with ugly joint holes, have asked theĀ factory to check them carefully again before packingĀ them into theĀ master carton

In additon, I found the webbing joining way at theĀ main factory is better than theĀ branch, have asked their branch also to use this way/method.

Notes
Remember to sayĀ the factory. Very simple but would be a big improvement.

Edited by Jacob @ SE