Email Service Notes (Cricket)

Your Original Email

Last Saturday night, I wanted to buy a bottle of wine. I remembered I have been to a Italian restaurant and I liked their wine. So I decided to buy wine in there. I went to their bar and the bartender received me. He was so nice and he gave me three types of wine to try. I felt the first one was a little bitter but the smell was sweet; the second one tasted good but it had strong smell of dioxide; the third one also tasted a little bitter and the smell was not good. I cared about the smell so I chose the first one, and I really liked that smell.

Your Edited Email

Last Saturday night, I wanted to buy a bottle of wine. I remembered I had been to a Italian restaurant and I liked their wine. So I decided to go buy wine there. I went to their bar and the bartender received me. He was so nice and he gave me three types of wine to try. I felt the first one was a little bitter but the smell was sweet; the second one tasted good but it had a strong smell of dioxide; the third one also tasted a little bitter and the smell was not good. I cared about the smell so I chose the first one, and I really liked the smell.