Email Service Notes (Cricket)

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Library Notice for Every Newly-enrolled International Students

Very warmly welcome to join our school. I believe that you will spend more time in this library. The following are the notices of library that can help us to build library well:
1) Opening time is from 8:30 am to 8:30 pm everyday
2) Chinese books are collected on the first floor, English and other foreigner’s books are collected on the second floor. There are open reading area on every floor where is for your reading, so do not take books to different floor.
3) Everyone can borrow 5 books at most and should return them in 30 days
4) An open international-student area for every international student, where is on the three floor, it’s 24 hours old. It is very convent for your reading or accomplishing classwork.

I hope that you can learn lots of knowledge and skills from the next 3 years.

Sincerely
Liming

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Library Notice for All Newly-enrolled International Students

We/I? very warmly welcome you to our school. We/I? believe that you will spend a lot of time in this library.

Please observe the notices below.

1) Opening time is from 8:30 am to 8:30 pm everyday

2) Chinese books are collected on the first floor, English and other foreign books are collected on the second floor. There is an open reading area on every floor.

3) Do not take books to different floors.

3) Everyone can borrow 5 books at a time and should return them within 30 days

4) There is an open international-student area for all international students. It’s located on the 3rd floor and is open 24 hours.

I hope that you build great knowledge and skills over the next 3 years.

Sincerely
Liming