Email Service Notes (Cricket)

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I am a soldier who have served in army for 14 years as a military officer. Most people said my job was so cool. I agree with them,but it isn’t like what they thought. I have made hard effort they didn’t realize , from a soldier to a drill instructor. the process means hard-working, vanished youth and separated family. But I don’t regret for the time I have went through. Because I have a patriotic heart proudly being a solder. Now I will leave the army and begin a new life. Facing the rapid development of society and economic, actually I am confused about my future. But I am not afraid, I believe my military experiences will give me some power to overcome difficulties. It should bring good luck to me. So, to be better myself everyday.

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I am a soldier who has served in the army for 14 years as a military officer. Most people  say my job is cool. I agree with them,but it isn’t like what they think. They don’t know how hard I’ve worked to go from a soldier to a drill instructor. The process meant losing my youth and having a separated family.  But I don’t regret the hard times I have went through. Because I have a patriotic heart and am proud of being a soldier. Now I will leave the army and begin a new life. I have to face the rapid development of society and economy,  I am actually confused about my future. But I am not afraid, I believe my military experiences will give me some power to overcome difficulties. It should bring good luck to me. So, I will be better for myself everyday.