Email Service Notes (Ben)

Your Original Email

This is the happiest moment of my life

A: You know what, even Sam has a girlfriend.
B：That’s tight, mom.
A：God. I’m saying you should go out and find a girlfriend
B: I wish I could go out, but I got to hit the books.
A: Well, you had it coming. You can’t live with your books.
B: I remember when I received my master degree, that was my happiest moment of my life. That’s why I’m pursuing my phd.
A:What good is being a PHD without a beloved girl?
B: Are you done yet, mom? I’m only 25. Just because I don’t have a girlfriend today doesn’t mean I won’t have forever.
A: I’m sorry for overthinking about it.
B: Never mind. Guess what. I think maybe you are right, I should hang out with girls more often.
A: Yes, I have already arranged an appointment with Anty Wang’s daughter tomorrow night for you.
B: What?!
A: Don’t panic. She’s super pretty and smart. If you don’t go, you’ll be sorry.

Your Edited Email

This is the happiest moment of my life

A: You know what, even Sam has a girlfriend.
B：That’s cool, mom.
A：God. I’m saying you should go out and find a girlfriend
B: I wish I could go out, but I got to hit the books.
A: Well, you had it coming. You can’t live with your books.
B: I remember when I received my Master’s degree, that was my happiest moment of my life. That’s why I’m pursuing my PhD.
A:What good is being a PhD without a beloved girl?
B: Are you done yet, mom? I’m only 25. Just because I don’t have a girlfriend today doesn’t mean I won’t have one forever.
A: I’m sorry for overthinking about it.
B: Never mind. Guess what. I think maybe you are right, I should hang out with girls more often.
A: Yes, I have already arranged an appointment with Aunt Wang’s daughter tomorrow night for you.
B: What?!
A: Don’t panic. She’s super pretty and smart. If you don’t go, you’ll be sorry.