Email Service Notes 8th February (Celeste)***

Hi Celeste
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Following is my wirte.
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I gave myself a long-leave in January. I went to Philippines with my colleagues. It was a team building travel. At that time, I resided with one colleague, named Ellen. She worked hard and have a strong willing to learn anything, who like me so much.

We have the same boss, we shared some stories each other, which were worse stories about her. Once she judged someone was not one side with her, she would not give you a good face. Sometimes she is very aggressive in order to show that she is a team leader. Sometimes she is edge because it can show her ability. And even sometimes she set up one hook to root out someone she doesn’t like. So she is not friendly and doesn’t want to help colleagues. Yes, this is my boss. I think she is a good leader at first, but now I knew her more.

It sound like a bad story, Chen taught me that to see it is an opportunity to get along with this kind of person. Compare with her, I am so grateful that I have some friendly friends like you and Jessie.

I should keep going and hard work this year!

Edited

Hi Damon!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Below is your edited writing!
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I gave myself a long-leave in January. I went to the Philippines with my colleagues. It was a team building trip/vacation. At that time, I roomed/stayed/shared a room with one colleague, named Ellen. She works hard and has a strong will to learn anything…

who like me so much. ***What does this mean?

We have the same boss. We shared some stories with each other about her.

Once, she judged someone was not one side with her, she would not give you a good face. (super chinglish)

Sometimes she is very aggressive in order to show that she is a team leader.  (very good!)

Sometimes she is edge because it can show her ability.(super chinglish)

And even sometimes she sets up a hook to fish someone out that she doesn’t like. So she is not friendly and doesn’t want to help colleagues. Yes, this is my boss. I thought she was a good leader at first, but now I know her better.

It sounds like a bad story. Chen taught me to see it is an opportunity to get along with this kind of person. Compared to her, I am so grateful that I have some friendly friends like you and Jessie.

I should keep on moving and work hard this year!