Email Service Notes 6th November

Your Original Email

I’m still in Beijing, I’m planning come back to Shanghai tomorrow, but I’m not sure if I can finish my work tonight. Last night when I finished my work, it’s almost 3 am. But I’m happy in Beijing because here people are very nice. I like northerners’s character.

Your Edited Email

I’m still in Beijing and am planning to come back to Shanghai tomorrow, but I’m not sure if I can finish my work by then. Last night when I finished my work, it was almost 3 am but I’m happy in Beijing because the people here are very nice. I really like the character of people from the north… they are much more friendly than a lot of other people in China. 

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