Email Service Notes 4th March

Your Original Email

During lunch time, my colleague showed me a fashion blogger’s website. The blogger is dynamic in commercial photograph and he is also the owner of a nonprofit company, which is focus on protecting elephants in Kenyans. In order to keep the corporation continuing, he is always raising money by selling his photos online and most of them are certainly impressed the public. You can never imagine how cruel people are but from his pictures. When he first went there, he found that huge amounts of elephants were hunting by people for their ivory. No one helps them, they can only wait for death. So he swore that he would give to charity to protect them from harm.

Your Edited Email

During lunch time, my colleague showed me a fashion blogger’s website. The blogger is dynamic in commercial photographs and he is also the owner of a nonprofit organisation, which focuses on protecting elephants in Kenya. In order to keep the corporation going, he is always raising money by selling his photos online and most of them certainly impress the public. You can never imagine how cruel people are but from his pictures – what do u mean?. When he first went there, he found that huge amounts of elephants were being hunted by people for their ivory. No one helps them, so they can only wait for death. Following this, he swore that he would give to charity to protect them from harm.