Email Service Notes 4th January (Celeste)

Writing exercise

Would you like to donate your loved one’s face after his or her death? One surgeon in China, who has performance the first face transplantation in China in 2006 said in an interview that he has been waiting for many years to find another donor to perform his second surgery, but it was very difficult.

His second patient is a 30 years old woman, who was disfigured in a fire when she was 20. Now she has two children but in order to avoid scaring them, she has to wear a mask. Because the surgeon couldn’t find a suitable donor, she has to wait longer.

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Would you like to donate your loved one’s face after his or her/their death? One surgeon in China, who has performed the first face transplantation in China in 2006, said in an interview that he has been waiting for many years to find another donor to perform his second surgery, but it was very difficult.

His second patient is a 30 years old woman who was disfigured in a fire when she was 20. Now she has two children but in order to avoid scaring them, she has to wear a mask. Because the surgeon can’t find a suitable donor, she has to wait longer.