Email Service Notes 3rd December (Tony)

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About my future
yesterday I told my parents that in the next year I may would be very busy. Because I had a lot of things to do:working, working out, syudying, part time job etc. I said maybe I didn’t have much time being with you. they said: don’t worry about that and take care of yourself and don’t be too tired. you have grown up, do what you want. We just want you to put us in your heart. the words “put us in your heart” touched my heart strongly.
I am at twentieths, which is the best age for people from twenty to thirty. I don’t want to waste valuable time, so I need to know what I want and what I should do. Every week I plan my schedule to ensure that I can study English, go to the gym and do part time job at least three times a week. My friends told me that your rhythm was too quick and didn’t give yourself too much pressure. I know it will be a little tired and hard, but I believe if I put more effort on myself, I will make greater success in the future.
My future is bright. I believe myself.

Correction –

About my future

Yesterday I told my parents that next year I might be very busy. Because I have a lot of things to do. Like working, exercising, studying and a part time job. I said maybe I wouldn’t have much time to see you. They said, don’t worry about that and take care of yourself and don’t be too tired. You have grown up, do what you want. We just want you to keep us in your heart. the words “keep us in your heart” really touched me.
I am in my twenties, so I don’t want to waste valuable time. I need to know what I want and what I should do. Every week I plan my schedule to ensure that I can study English, go to the gym and do a part time job at least three times a week. My friends told me that my rhythm was too quick and I shouldn’t put too much pressure on myself. I know it will be a little tiring and hard, but I believe if I put more effort on myself, I will be more successful in the future.
My future is bright and I believe in myself.