Email Service Notes 2nd May (Tony)

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“Nongtang” Culture

Shanghai is a place blending history and modernity, eastern and western culture

if you want to learn about real Shanghai’s local culture, I recommend you to to go to “Nongtang”, which are small public alleys with private residences.

Nongtangs are like folk-custom museums, presenting a window into a local way of life with open and tolerant culture.

Because of the limited living space, five to eight families share one kitchen and one bathroom, which make people learn how to compromise with each other and develop empathy.

Moreover, the first residents of Nongtong were from different place of China, they settled in Shanghai, at the same time, brought various cultures. So Nongtang is also a place blending diverse cultures.

Nongtang culture is also Shanghai culture. we accept everyone, we welcome everyone, we blend different culture of all over the world, which is the reason why shanghai is an amazing place. I love Shanghai.

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“Nongtang” Culture

Shanghai is a place blending history and modernity, eastern and western cultures.

If you want to learn about authentic Shanghai local culture, I recommend a trip through a “Nongtang”, which are small public alleys with private residences.

Nongtangs are like folk museums, presenting a window into a local way of life with open and tolerant culture.

Because of the limited living space, five to eight families share one kitchen and one bathroom, which makes people learn how to compromise and develop empathy, while building character and patience.

Not to mention, the first residents of Nongtong were from different places of China, they settled in Shanghai, around the same time and brought various cultures with them. So Nongtangs are also places blending diverse cultures.

Nongtang culture is also Shanghai culture. we accept everyone with open arms, we welcome everyone, we blend different culture from all over the world, which is the reason why shanghai is an amazing place. I love Shanghai.

Great Writing, try to use the thesaurus to find more new words.