Email Service Notes 29th March (Tony)

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cold dishes
last three weeks ago on Saturday I met my friend at an restaurant at 1 pm. It had been one month since we met. She said that there would be two friends coming here. We could order food first. Later she had chosen food and went back.
“Most food they sell is cold.” She siad.
“Alright, that’s my first try eating this kind of food.” I said.
“I chose four kinds of food as my lunch, which just one of them is warm.
“Cold dishes are not my cup of tea. It tastes not good” I said.
“It’s ok. Don’t eat it if you don’t like. I am sorry.”
“You don’t need to say sorry. I am just not used to eating that.
After a while, two friends came and they ordered food. They thought the food is tasteful and healthy and eat it up.
Since I didn’t eat much food, I went to another restaurant to buy a bowl of dumolings.
There is a big difference between Chinese food and Western food. If I ate too much cold food, my stomach would be feel uncomfortable.I prefer hot food to cold food. I think Chinese food has a good balance of/between vegetables and meat. Sometimes Westerns eat too much meat, on the other hand, Chinese food is a little oily for wsterns.

Your Corrected Email – 

Cold dishes:
Three weeks ago on Saturday I met my friend at a restaurant at 1 pm. It had been a month since we last met. She said that there would be two friends coming also. First we ordered, then she came back.
“Most food they sell is cold.” She said.
“Alright, it’s my first time eating this kind of food.” I said.
“I chose four dishes for lunch, of which only one was warm.
“Cold dishes are not my cup of tea. They don’t taste good” I said.
“It’s ok. Don’t eat it if you don’t like. I am sorry.”
“You don’t need to say sorry. I am just not used to eating that stuff.
After a while, two of our friends came and they ordered. They thought the food is tasty and healthy and they ate it up.
Since I didn’t eat that much food, I went to another restaurant to buy a bowl of dumplings.
There is a big difference between Chinese food and Western food. If I eat too much cold food, my stomach would be upset. I prefer hot food to cold food. I think Chinese food has a good balance of vegetables and meat. Sometimes Westerners eat too much meat, on the other hand, Chinese food is a little greasy for westerners.