Email Service Notes 29th April (Tony)

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What would you ask for if you could ask God for a superpower?
If I could have such an opportunity , I would ask to be able to fly. It’s true that as the developing of technology, people can fly a plane even a rocket, but flying by yourself will be a totally different experience that makes you understand the word “freedom” at most. Furthermore, living in a big city where there are serious traffic problems, being able to fly would mean a lot to you. Imagine that you don’t need to wait in the traffic jam or be pulled over by a policeman when you just start speeding up. Who wouldn’t want this?
If I could have a second chance, I would ask to be able to read people’s minds. Do you rack your brains to figure out what your clients need, how to make your boss happy or what present your significant other wants for their birthday? Well, this superpower enable you easily get more and more orders, get promotions and always be happy in your love life. Does it sound amazing? But it also enable you to see people’s privacy and you need to be very careful about it. For me, I would never cross the line. Um…I would try my best not to.
The last thing I would ask for is predicting future. Although it would help me to avoid troubles and get what I want much easier, it is very boring to know everything in your life before they happen. Just like, you will not be curious of a puzzle if you already know the answer.
Well, I have made up my mind and am just waiting for the opportunity. Good luck to me!

Your Corrected Email: 

What would you ask for if you could ask God for a superpower?/ If you could ask god for a superpower, what would it be?
If I could have such an opportunity , I would ask to be able to fly. It’s true that as technology is advancing, people can fly a plane or even a rocket, but flying without a machine would be a totally different experience that would make you understand the word “freedom” at most/ least?. Furthermore, living in a big city where there are serious traffic problems, being able to fly would mean a lot to you. Imagine that you don’t need to wait in traffic jams and you wouldn’t get pulled over by a policeman when you just start speeding up. Who wouldn’t want this?
If I could have a second choice, I would ask to be able to read people’s minds. Do you rack your brain figuring out what your clients need, how to make your boss happy or what present your significant other wants for their birthday? Well, this superpower would enable you to easily get an increasing amount of orders from clients, get promotions and always be happy in your love life. Does it sound amazing? But it would also enable you to see people’s privacy and you would need to be very careful with it. For me, I would never cross the line. Well…I would try my best not to.
The last thing I would ask for is to be able to predicting future. Although it would help me to avoid troubles and get what I want much easier, it would become very boring to know everything in your life before it happens. Just like, you will not be curious about a puzzle if you already know the answer.
Well, I have made up my mind and am just waiting for the opportunity. Good luck to me!