Email Service Notes 26th November (Tony)

Demo StudentSam

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Let’s go to the gym
As we all know, exercise is good for our health. Now more and more people take gym memberships to be stronger and healthier, but there are still many people who don’t want to work out and choose very unhealthy way to lose weight. So the consequence is they become less healthier and are still fat.
A few months ago the company offered/provided us a bank card, which could be the four months free gym membership. I took it very quickly and suggested my workmate also to take it. At first she was a little interested in it. However, after a while she didn’t do it. I askd her why you still didn’t take the membership.she said she didn’t have time or had to look after her son.
Not only she didn’t go to the gym but also most of my coworkers didn’t either.
I want to say we need to work out often. Many seniors suffer from kinds of disease. If we work out at young age, I think we can keep good health even at old age. Don’t be lazy. Work out now. You won’t regret what your choice.

Correction – 

Let’s go to the gym
As we all know, exercise is good for our health. Now more and more people are getting gym memberships to be stronger and healthier. But there are still many people who don’t want to work out and choose very unhealthy ways to lose weight. So the result is that they become less healthy and are still fat.
A few months ago the company gave us a gift card, good for up to four months free gym membership. I took it very quickly and suggested my workmate also take one. At first she was a little interested in it, however after a while she lost interest. I asked her why she didn’t take advantage of the membership. She said she doesn’t have time or she had to look after her son.
Not only did she not go to the gym but also most of my coworkers didn’t either.
I want to say we need to work out often. Seniors can suffer from all kinds of diseases. If we work out when we’re young, I think we can stay healthy even when we’re old. Don’t be lazy, work out now! You won’t regret it.