Email Service Notes 26th July (Harmony)

Original:

As developing Chinese economy, china is stronger and stronger than before. We can see made in china in everywhere, but some problems are coming to us, especially air pollution. We knew the reason that is gray sky instead of blue sky, because we have used many coals to make electric power and have used bad gas for our cars. However, we have done something to change these problem. For example, we are using electric car instead of traditional cars and we are building the nuclear power instead of fire power. I think we will be better in the future and I believe we can do that to change these problems.

Edited:

As the Chinese economy develops, China is stronger than before. We can see “made in china” products everywhere, but some problems are coming to us, especially air pollution. We know the reason that the sky is gray instead of blue, because we have used coal to make electric power and have used bad gas for our cars. However, we have done some things to change these problems. For example, we are using electric cars instead of traditional cars and we are building nuclear power plants instead of using fire power. I think we will be better in the future and I believe we can do that to change these problems.

Eg.  China is becoming more and more strong.