Email Service Notes 26th February (Jesse)

Your Original Email

I have lived in a condo for a year, there is a soft mattress in this room which I had used almost a year, but I don’t like soft mattress, and I never thought about moving it out of my room, I just thought maybe I could buy a board put on it. Last Friday I forgot my keys, and I asked for a receptionist of my hotel to help me opening my door. She told me a room that next my room was available. So I asked if I could have a look, she said sure and she opened the door of this room. She told me this room had been rented and the new lodger wanted to change a bigger mattress. Suddenly I thought why I move my mattress out of my room. So I asked the receptionist if I could don’t use my mattress. She told me she asked her boss and then told me. I like do everything immediately if I thought. So that night I moved the mattress out of my bed. The next day the receptionist told me I could don’t use the mattress and they moved it out of my room. I had slept the bed without mattress for 3 nights, I feel goo.

Your Edited Email

I have lived in a condo for a year. There is a soft mattress in this room which I have used for almost a year, but I don’t like soft mattresses, and I never thought about moving it out of my room. I just thought maybe I could buy a board put on it (what do you mean?). Last Friday I forgot my keys, and I asked for a receptionist of my hotel to help me open my door. She told me that a room next to my room was available. So I asked if I could have a look, and she said sure and she opened the door of the room. She told me this room had been rented and the new lodger wanted to change to a bigger mattress. Suddenly I thought “why did I move my mattress out of my room?” / I wondered why I moved my mattress out of my room. So I asked the receptionist if I could not use my mattress. She told me she would ask her boss and then tell me. I like to do everything immediately as soon as I think of it. So that night I moved / took the mattress off my bed. The next day the receptionist told me I could not / I was able to not use the mattress and they moved it out of my room. I had slept the bed without a mattress for 3 nights, and I felt really good.