Email Service Notes 25th October (Raph)

Original:

Today’s task
I got up early at 6：20 this morning because my husband went on his business trip. So, I must wake my son up and prepare breakfast for him. I made a hamburger with beaf, egg and some vegetables. My son was surprised at it because he knew that mom doesn’t like cooking.
After breakfast, I sent him to the school bus station. Opps, the school bag is so heavy! I believe he will have a happy day at school. And I have a lot of things to do today.
I turned back home to do some laundry. The sky was suddenly become dark. It looked it will be rain in the afternoon.

Edited:

Today’s task
I got up at 6:20 this morning because my husband went on a business trip, so I had to wake my son up and prepare breakfast for him. I made him a hamburger with beef, egg and some vegetables. My son was surprised, because he knows that I don’t like cooking. After breakfast, I sent him to the school bus station. His school bag is so heavy! I believe he had a happy day at school.

I also had a lot of things to do today. I went back home to do some laundry. The sky suddenly became dark. It looked like it would rain in the afternoon.