Email Service Notes 25th July (Harmony)

Caroline C Email Service

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When I was a kid, technology was not as good as it is now. There were not too many cars in the road and telephones only can be used for communication. In those days, there was no need to worry about the safety of food and people were ready to help others. people lived simple and happy lives.
Thanks to advances in technology, we can enjoy a high-quality life this period and our society has been transformed in many ways. Traffic is more convenient these days and world is much smaller than before because of network. We can do many things on line instead of going out such as shopping, ordering and reading which save more time. Mobile phones have more functions by which we can listen to music, play games, see a movie and so on. However, people become stressed and tired with their work especially those who live in big cities. More and more employees have to do overtime even on weekends. Some students commit suicide as they are not able to handle their big stress of study. Severe competence in modern society makes everyone busy as a bee so that they spend less time staying with their families. Sometimes people go to see a movie or have a drink with friends to relax themselves, sometimes they take a trip instead. On my personal level, no matter how complex the world is, we should do all in our power to live a healthy, happy and meaningful life.

Edited:

When I was a kid, technology was not as good as it is now. There were not too many cars on the road and telephones could only be used for communication. Those days, there was no need to worry about the safety of food and people were ready to help others. People lived simple and happy lives.
Thanks to advances in technology, we can enjoy a high-quality life nowadays and our society has been transformed in many ways. Traffic is more convenient these days, and the world is much smaller than before because of all of the networks. We can do many things online instead of going out, such as shopping, ordering food/groceries(?), and reading, which saves more time. Mobile phones have more functions, we can listen to music, play games, watch a movie, and so on.

However, people have become/became stressed and tired from their work, especially those who live in big cities. More and more employees have to do overtime, even on the weekends. Some students commit suicide as they are not able to handle the stress of studying. Severe competence in modern society makes everyone busy as a bee so that they spend less time with their families.

Sometimes people go to see a movie or have a drink with friends to relax, sometimes they take a trip instead. In my personal opinion, no matter how complex the world is, we should do all in our power to live a healthy, happy, and meaningful life.