Email Service Notes 22nd September (Celeste)

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Dear xxxx,

Here comes the new proposal of our Cartier Christmas Tree designed especially for Plaza XX.

You could find the layout and rendering in the attached file. Our PR team dedicated to the proposal and put new interaction idea into it. It makes the Christmas tree unique for AAA in China and is a pioneer of luxury brand together with shopping mall.

There must be something need to further discuss about the reality according to the proposal. Below list some points from where we stand for your preview. Time is limited, and hope we could call for a meeting next week.
1. Is there any comment for the proposal, especial regarding with the approval process of government?
2. The display period: our production would be finished in the end of Nov. and how long the installation takes need to discuss.
3. We will invite Mrs. BBB to the lightning ceremony for the Christmas tree. If you could offer a better price of the rental, as per our talk before, under 800K in ttl, we will try to invite her husband Mr.CCC together. As we all known, the couple really cost a lot.
4. For the installation details, the process of agreement, the operation and maintenance for the interaction part, we would like to have a meeting with you and your construction team in advance. How about next Monday or Wednesday?

In addition, could you please get back the contact of the project? Our PR agency may liaison directly with the contact and prepare for the meeting.

Thanks for your cooperation

Edited

Dear xxxx,

Here is the new proposal of our Cartier Christmas Tree designed especially for Plaza XX.

You can find the layout and rendering in the attached file. Our PR team is dedicated to the proposal and put a new interaction idea into it. It makes the Christmas tree unique for AAA in China and a pioneer of luxury brands joined together with shopping malls.

There are some things that need to be further discussed about the reality according to the proposal. Below is a list of some points from where we stand for your preview. Time is limited, and I hope we can arrange/schedule a meeting next week.
1. Are there any comments for the proposal, especially regarding with the approval process from the government?
2. The display period: our production would be finished in the end of Nov. and the installation period will need to be discussed.
3. We will invite Mrs. BBB to the lighting ceremony of the Christmas tree. If you could offer a better price of the rental, as per our conversation before, under 800K in ttl, we will try to invite her husband Mr.CCC as well. As we all know, their appearances are pricey / the couple really costs a lot.
4. For the installation details, the process of agreement, the operation and maintenance for the interaction part, we would like to have a meeting with you and your construction team in advance. How about next Monday or Wednesday?

In addition, could you please get a hold of/get in touch with the contact of the project? Our PR agency may liaison directly with the contact and prepare for the meeting.

Thanks for your cooperation.