Email Service Notes 17th December (Jesse)

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Chat at the diner
One day a friend from Sweden chatted to/with me at a diner. He had a common appearance but always with happy expression cross his face.
Since I liked western food, I asked him some questiongs about it. He said he liked to eat veal, steak, especially big hamburger with thick ground beef and double pieces of cheese. He used to travel to Germany, which/where was famous for its sausages and pork chop. He said German worked very carefully and they wouldn’t cut corners at work. It’s a good example for Chinese people. Sometimes we achieve our goals too fast. We don’t need to do things by the book or cut corners. We should accomplish our goals in moderation.
I said I liked pizza with so much cheese and ketchup and kinds of vegetables and meat, but sometimes I had to pick out chillies because I was not interested in spicy food.
After a chat, we had a good meal. Both he and I enjoyed the food.

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Chat at the diner
One day a friend from Sweden chatted to/with me at a diner. He had a common appearance but always had a happy expression on his face.
Since I liked western food, I asked him some questions about it. He said he liked to eat veal, steak, and especially big hamburgers with thick ground beef and 2 pieces of cheese. He used to travel to Germany, which is famous for its sausages and pork chops. He said Germans worked very carefully and they wouldn’t cut corners at work. I think this is a good example for Chinese people to follow. Sometimes we achieve our goals too fast. We don’t need to do things by the book or cut corners. We should accomplish our goals in moderation. < --- review this part next class
I said I liked pizza with a little cheese and ketchup and all kinds of vegetables and meat, but sometimes I had to pick out the chillies because I was not interested in spicy food.
After a chat, we had a good meal and both he and I enjoyed the food.