Email Service Notes 17th April (Ben)

Very good text, Haley. Don’t sell yourself short, your English is good 🙂 Welcome to Smart English !

Ben

Original

I’m very glad to join the Smart English family. In my first class, I met Celeste as my first teacher who looked very beautiful and charming especially her eyes. She always smiled so that it let me relax in class. But I couldn’t speak english frequently because I didn’t know how to say and weak of vocabulary. First she reviewed knowledge that I learned in last class. Then she teached me some simple words and pronunciations. At last, she found a paper for me in order to improve my pronunciation. When I read the paper, she marked the words which I didn’t read right. In addition, she was responsibility for me. But I didn’t think that it was fit for me. In her class, I had less chance to speak english and she couldn’t use right ways to lead me. In my second class, my teacher was Jesse. He had a useful way which made me easy to understand and learn. Also he was very humor. I liked his class and learned many things. Thanks for every teacher in Smart English.

Edited version

I’m very glad to join the Smart English family.

In my first class, I met Celeste as my first teacher who looked very beautiful and charming, especially her eyes.

She always smiled so that it to let me relax in class. But I couldn’t speak English well because I didn’t know how to say things and because of my weak vocabulary.

First she reviewed knowledge that I had learned in last class. (past of the past)

Then she taught me some simple words and pronunciations. (teach / taught / taught)

Finally, she found a paper for me in order to improve my pronunciation. (at last = you waited for a long time, and now you are relieved)

When I read the paper, she marked the words which I didn’t read right. In addition, she was responsible with me.

But I didn’t think that it was fit for me. In her class, I had less chances to speak English and she couldn’t use right ways to lead me. In my second class, my teacher was Jesse. He had a useful way which made me easy to make me understand and learn. Also he was very humorous. I liked his class and learned many things. Thanks to every teacher in Smart English.