Email Service Notes 14th December (Celeste)***

Hi Summer,

I don’t understand the end of your email. I think you should talk about it in your next class.

Merry Christmas, Celeste

These days I made a new friend, I told him my dream, he completely supported my dream and he had been doing something for me. I really appreciated that he could help me. I told him my dream was to rebuild my parents house and wanted to study abroad. Several days ago my previous boss asked me if I was interested in to go to another company. I knew there was a previous colleague works in this company now, so I called him. He told me he can give me a manager’s position and he told me he can wait me for half a year. So I thought about that, I think I can quit my job on next May, then I go to my hometown to rebuild my parents house for two months. Then go to the new company. I told my plan to my friend, he looked liked didn’t agree my plan. He said when I first met you you didn’t say that, and do you think you can rebuild a house in two months. His words made me feel depressed. So I think I needed to think more clear what is really I want. I can’t give up my dream, so I think I need more time to rebuild my parents house, and before I told my friend this house will be my works, so I need to treat it seriously.

Edited

These days I made a new friend. I told him my dream, he completely supported my dream and he had been doing something for me.

I really appreciated that he could help me. I told him my dream was to rebuild my parents’ house and wanted to study abroad. Several days ago, my previous boss asked me if I was interested in going to another company. I have a previous colleague who works in this other company now, so I called him. He told me he can give me a manager’s position and he told me he can wait for me for half a year. So I thought about it.

I think I can quit my job next May, then go to my hometown to rebuild my parents’ house for two months. Then, go to the new company. I told my plan to my friend and he looked like he didn’t agree with my plan.

He said, “When I first met you, you didn’t say that. Do you think you can rebuild a house in two months?” His words made me feel depressed. So I think I need to think clearly about what I really want. I can’t give up my dream, so I think I need more time to rebuild my parents’ house…

and before I told my friend this house will be my works, so I need to treat it seriously.