Email Service Notes 10th March

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Jay Chou is one of the most popular singers in China who is going to hold concerts all around the world this year. When I knew that he would hold 3 concerts in Shanghai, I didn’t take it seriously. Then I was really shocked by the truth that all the tickets online were sold out in seconds today. You can imagine how crazy these people are.

All the children born in 80’s had ever listened Jay Chou’s music, which was one part of our childhood. However, when he was at school, he was a shy boy who worn a baseball cap all the time. No one knew that he would become a super star in the future, because he often sat in the corner alone and wrote songs for a whole day.

In 1997, he got a chance to perform on a TV show. Then Jacky Wu who dynamic in Taiwan entertainment circle invited him to work as musical assistant for his corporation. At first, no one cared about his songs, but he persevered and he believed that he could finally overcome all the difficulty. Once he finished over 50 songs in one day. In 2001, he tried selling his first album “Jay” and he was succeeded. Everyone loved him. He proved himself to the world.

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Jay Chou is one of the most popular singers in China who is going to hold concerts all around the world this year. When I knew that he would hold 3 concerts in Shanghai, I didn’t take it seriously but then I was really shocked by the truth that all the tickets online were sold out in seconds today. You can imagine how crazy these people are.

All the children born in the 80’s used to listen Jay Chou’s music, so it was a big part our childhood. However, when he was at school, he was a shy boy who wore a baseball cap all the time. No one knew that he would become a super star in the future, because he often sat in the corner alone writing songs all day.

In 1997, he got a chance to perform on a TV show. Then Jacky Wu who dynamic (<– what does that mean?) in Taiwan entertainment industry invited him to work as a musical assistant for his corporation. At first, no one cared about his songs, but he persevered and he believed that he could finally overcome all the difficulties. Once he finished over 50 songs in one day and in 2001, he tried selling his first album “Jay” and he was successful. Everyone loved him and he proved himself to the world.