Email Service 15th/19th June (Harmony)

Doris 15th June

Should we  help strangers?

Helping strangers is has always been considered as a  virtue of people.we need help others throughout our life,whatever we travel to other place or stay at hometown.on the other hand ,helping others can make us happy.we feel great when we are be trust.

However ,some people are cautious when they comes to helping strangers,they say that helping others involves risks of getting hurt or cheated.Lending a hand to a stranger always puts us in a passive environment. it means trusting someone we do not even know.

In my opinion,we should still to offer what we can do to those needed strangers,Meanwhile,we should beware of getting cheated and use our common sense to analysis whether the strangers are real needed help or just cheats.Detecting anything unusual, we should defend ourselves or turn to the police.

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Should we help strangers?

Helping strangers has always been considered a virtue of people.  We need to help others throughout our life, if we travel to other places or stay in our hometown.  On the other hand, helping others can make us happy.  We feel great when we are being trusted.

However, some people are cautious when it comes to helping strangers, they say that helping others involves risks of getting hurt or cheated.  Lending a hand to a stranger always puts us in a passive environment, it means trusting someone we do not even know.

In my opinion, we should still offer what we can do to those strangers in need.  Meanwhile, we should be aware of getting cheated and use our common sense to analyze whether the strangers really need help or just cheats. If we detect anything unusual, we should defend ourselves or turn them to the police.

Doris 19th June

Extravagant Spending on College Campus

according to a survey about college student’s cost rise every month in recent years,many students don’t have the concept about thrift,they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society.this extravagant spending is primarily cause by the following factors.

first of all,most to students are the only child of their family.they are infant of their parents,so they can get more money from their parents,second,as the live rise,parents can give more money to child cost.moreover,some students like to pursue fashion and trends,which tend to need more money.

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Extravagant Spending on College Campuses

According to a survey about college student’s, spending rises every month.  In recent years, many students don’t have the concept about thrift, they spend money from their parents before they enter into society.  This extravagant spending is primarily cause by the following factors:

first of all, most to students are the only child of their family. they are the infant of their parents, so they can get more money from their parents.  Second, as the live rise (?)/ as they grow up, parents can give more money to child’s spending.  Moreover, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tend to need more money.

*** Doris, make sure you watch your spacing within the punctuation.  Always put a space after a period.  Also any comma’s (,) need to be against the word in front of it, with a space afterwards.

Good work!