Email Service 10th April (Celeste)

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Every day,I went to school to pass on the way to the family mart.
In the mart,you can always see a lot of people come and go. They went to the mart and got out of here after shopping. These kind of busy scenes will be appear in the family mart again and again.
We used the convenience of mart that you can buy  any of the items you want in the convenience store.At the same time,our life is inseparable from its.I am really into the convenience store.The most important point is I can’t imagine if our life without convenience store that it would be like.

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Every day on my way to school I pass by a Family Mart. / every day when I go to school, I go past a family mart. 
In the shop, you can always see a lot of people coming and going. They go in and out of the mart after shopping. These kinds of busy scenes will appear in this Family Mart again and again.
We like the convenience that you can buy  any items you want in the convenience store. At the same time, our lives are inseparable from them. I am really into convenience stores. The most important point is I can’t imagine what our lives would be like without convenience stores.

get out – inside a car / chair

go out – walk out / drive out