Email Review 4th May (Celeste)

Original

Yesterday, I received the email from the professor Liu of my university in France. We lost the connection for almost 10 years since I graduated from this university. Last month, I found my certificate of master was missing so that I emailed to the professor Liu to ask how to make up the missed certificate in France. Ms Liu is so nice as ten years ago, she called to the French educational office to consult the missing issues for me. I felt so lucky to have kind and wonderful professors in my life.

Edited

Yesterday, I received an email from Professor Liu from my university in France. We lost touch for almost 10 years since I graduated from university. Last month, I saw that/discovered that my master’s certificate was missing so, I emailed the professor to ask how to recreate/reprint the missing certificate in France. Ms. Liu is as nice as she was ten years ago. She called the French educational office to find out the process to reprint the document for me. I feel so lucky to have kind and wonderful professors in my life.

interviewer – person asking the q’s

interviewee – person answering the q’s