Email Review 23rd March

Original
I am responsible for the statistics of the hotel energy forms . Our department is responsible for managing a total of 5 hotel renovation projects in china , so the respective supervisors of these hotels sent us   their  hotel energy forms everyday, which can make us know the energy use and cost of  each hotel. Sometimes the Beijing Genting Star (Our hotel’s name)supervior  doesn’t  take this form seriously. For example, the price of natural gas was changed , but It doesn’t come out in the form.  In the email they did not mention it, either.Sometimes, the formula in the table can even be a mistake. I can endure these mistakes which canbe easy avoid .To be honest,I don’t think it is a good attitude towards work.

Edited
I am responsible for the statistics of the hotel energy forms. Our department is responsible for managing a total of 5 hotel renovation projects in China. The respective supervisors of these hotels send us their  hotel energy forms everyday, which allows us to know the energy usage and cost of each hotel. There is one hotel supervisor who sometimes does not take this form seriously. For example, the price of natural gas changed, but it does not show on the form. They also didn’t mention it in their email. Sometimes, the formula in the table can even be a mistake. I can handle these mistakes which are easy to avoid . To be honest, I just don’t think this is a good attitude towards work.

***I removed the name of the hotel from the edited version. Usually when writing something negative about another person we keep their identity anonymous or untold; unless this email review will be sent to your management where you would need to report their misconduct.