Email review 16th Jan (Jesse)

Yesterday I wanted to buy a train ticket on line, but I couldn’t buy it because of the train system, they told me I had register by my ID card, but I didn’t do that before, so I need to go to the train station to change it. When I arrived there, the train workers canceled my register, and she told me I need to register again, if I registered success told her and she will confirm on line, and that mean my register is finished. So I use my iPhone went to the train station official website, but I couldn’t went because my operation was so fast, then I called the 12306, they told me the reason may be was my network problem, so I closed 4G network, just use 3G, it really did work, I can’t believe that, anyway, I was happy at that time, so I registered soon and told the train worker, she operated on the internet and tole me my register was succeeded, so I decided buy one ticket to confirm if it really does work, at first it was normal but when I payed the money they told me the internet speed is too slow, so I opened my 4G immediately and it did work again, finally I bought my first train ticket use 12306, it’s good and I left the train station happily.

Yesterday I wanted to buy a train ticket online, but I couldn’t buy it because of the train system. They told me I had to register by my ID card, but I haven’t done that before, so I need to go to the train station to change it. When I arrived there, the train workers canceled my account / registration, and she told me I need to register again. If I registered successfully, I should tell her and she will confirm online, which means my registration is finished. So I used my iPhone to go to the train station official website, but I couldn’t go because I did it too fast. Then I called 12306, and they told me the reason may be my network problem. So, I closed 4G network, and just used 3G. It really did work which I couldn’t believe. Anyway, I was happy at that time, so I registered quickly and told the train worker. She checked online and told me my registration was successful. So I decided to buy a ticket to confirm if it really did work. At first it was normal but when I payed the money they told me the internet was too slow. So I turned on my 4G immediately and it worked again. Finally I bought my first train ticket through / using 12306, which was really good. Following this, I left the train station happily.

1 idea……….. + and / which / but / that + 2 idea.

I went to the park, which was very good.

I called the number that the woman gave me, and then I got on the train to go home.

After calling the number, I went and got on the train.

When I arrived at Smart English, Jesse said “Hello”.

I arrived at Smart English, and then Jesse said “Hello”.