Open F2F Class Notes_12th May (Harmony)

Demo StudentNobu

Geographical (gee – oh – graph – ih – cul)

 

I also watch some tv’s before – I also watched some tv programs before

 

I was featured on some fishing programs. – use your own name

 

Actor – you are pretending to be someone else. 

 

Bloopers:  the outtakes (the shots they didn’t use) from a tv show/movie.  The mistakes that were made. – The fisherman falls out of the boat, the fish hits his face. 

  • Blooper Reel – at the end of a video/ tv show.

Boat license:  a licence to drive a small ship/boat.

  • Drive a boat/ captain the boat

Original:

Besides, we should check the map around the fishing field very carefully and decide  the fist point to go. The key of choosing the point with weather and geographical information is to find the place where the fish like to stay comfortable or they are more easier to have baits. The changing  of atmospheric pressure caused by temperature or weather changing will cause winds. And the wind will cause the stream on the surface of water and it will give oxygen which makes fish staying more comfortable to the water. The stream of the water will also bring some planktons which small fish like to eat. If we can find some place which have enough oxygen and planktons in the water, it will increase the possibly to catch a big fish.

Edited:

Besides, we should check the map around the fishing field very carefully and decide the fist point/ place/ destination/ area to go. The point of choosing the place with weather and geographical information is to find the place where the fish like to stay comfortable, or there is more food for them. The changing of atmospheric pressure caused by temperature or weather changes will cause winds. And the wind will cause the stream on the surface of the water and it will give oxygen, which makes the fish more comfortable, to the water.  The stream of the water will also bring some planktons, which small fish like to eat. If we can find some place which has enough oxygen and planktons in the water, it will increase the possibility of catching a big fish.

The key:  the solution

The point:  the reason

TV shows/ Movies names: “use quotations”, Italicize   anything— so long as you make it look different from the rest of the writing.  *** No hard rule, except to make it look different than the rest of the writing***