Demo Class Notes (Ciel – JJ)
Bridgerton
Downton Abbey
Writing exercise
my name is ciel I  was 24 years old  my favorite  fruit is liulian  because I fell it smelling so good
I was born in cixi my mom is a teacher  but my study is not good then I  go to the artist school
my main class is opera  nobody can believe that I am a woman high singer  my music teacher al
ways let me eat much food   actually I don`t want to be a fat girl
the firist meet that ma boy friend and I and he was notice  me is  i was study in music school
he really really love music  but  in the true  I don`t like music from I go to the school  when I
study it not  enjoy  I  felt is too pain  or empress for me
Revised:
My name is Ciel I  am 24 years old  my favorite  fruit is durian  because it smells so good. I was born in Cixi. My mom is a teacher but my grades were not good so I went to an arts school. My major was opera. Nobody can believe that I am a Soprano. My music teacher always tells me to eat more food but I don’t want to become a fat girl.
The first time my boyfriend noticed me was because I studied music. He really really loves music but in reality I don’t like music. Since I started going to the school, I started to not enjoy it. I felt a lot of pain and pressure.
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