Demo Class Notes 4th July (Jesse)

local people – local shanghainese 

need to thinking – need to think / consider 

trip to boracai

it was about 5 years ago and i think its my first time to travelling abroad. and i travelling with some good friend, 4 girls go to together. …. because its famous of its white sand. besides the beautiful scene and nice food one thing which really impressed me was some problems i met during the trip. we have 4 girls went the place together, and 2 girls will left earlier. i am one of the 2 girls. before i went to the place i didn’t do any plan i just go with my friends and when we go back to shanghai i go to the wrong airport and i realised i go to the wrong airport in the middle of the road. 

it was about 5 years ago and i think it was my first time to travel abroad. and i was travelling / I travelled with some good friends, and it was just the 4 of us…. because it’s famous for its white sand. besides the beautiful scenery and nice food, one thing which really made an impression on me was some problems i had during the trip. It was the 4 of us that went to the place together, and 2 girls planned to leave earlier. i was one of the 2 girls. before i went there / to boracai i didn’t plan anything, i just went with my friends and when we came back to shanghai i went to the wrong airport and i realised i went to the wrong airport when I was on the way there.

chinglish grammar + word choice

past tense problems

some pronunciation – smoother

scenery = the thing you can see all around you

one thing which really made an impression on me – one thing which was really memorable