Demo Class Notes (Susan – Jesse)

i went to london with one of my friend actually shes from hk so she can speak english very well so she did everything, she prepared buy the tickets and booked the hotels. we stay in london almost 1 week and we have a friend here and she’s also from shanghai so we catch up. then we went to … and edin. i think edin is fantastic and you know when i saw the city it’s the james bond film. we went to london eye and a lot of museum and also we went to watch some exhibitions such as monet and actually i like …. more because it’s the countryside. that’s the one reason i want to improve english.

i went to / visited / traveled / took a trip / went on holiday to london with one of my friends actually she’s from hk so she can speak / she speaks english very well / her english is very good / her spoken English is very good / she’s very fluent when she speaks so she did everything, she arranged all the tickets and booked the hotels / she arranged all of our itinerary. we stayed in london for a week and we visited our friend there and she’s also from shanghai so we caught up. then we went to … and edin. i thought edin was fantastic and you know when i saw the city it looked like it was from a james bond film. we went to the london eye and a lot of museums and also we went to see some exhibitions such as monet and actually i like …. more because it’s in the countryside. that’s the one reason i want to improve english.

slow down, some grammar needed (self correction).

Vocabulary

i have a friend who is from london
i have a computer that / which is black
i bought a new computer which makes me very happy

see – the ability to find sth with your eyes / to experience sth with your eyes
look – the point of your eyes
watch – movement / focus
read – look at words to understand them

I saw that movie last week. We watched it for 2 hours together.

I watch that tv show every day.