Online Class Notes (Jesse)
Writing exercise
Typhoon is one of the common disasters in southeast of china, especially in WhenZhou. Because there is at least one Typhoon arriving at there every year.For most people ,typhoon coming is a bad new.But students are so happy when they get a typhoon news.Because when typhoon is arriving,students can get a extra holiday.there is a new typhoon called “fireworkâ€coming out these days.It is so lucky that we adjust our train time to get back to shanghai before “firework†arrived.Firework is not the biggest typhoon i had seen,but is the slowest one i had knew.The speed of it is only 15km per hour. The slow speed increases the destruction of typhoon.It bring us heavier rains and stronger wind.People begin to buy out the supermarket to avoid going out,even you cant buy foods by apps
Typhoon is one of the common disasters in the southeast of china, especially in WenZhou because there is at least one Typhoon arriving at there every year. For most people ,a typhoon coming is bad news but students are so happy when they get a typhoon news / get news of a typhoon. Because when a typhoon is about to arrive / just before a typhoon arrives / if a typhoon comes / if there is a typhoon,students can get an extra holiday. There has been a new typhoon called “fireworkâ€coming out recently and it is so lucky that we adjusted our time of our train to get back to shanghai before “firework†arrived. Firework is not the biggest typhoon i have seen,but is the slowest one i have heard about, at a speed of only 15km per hour. The slow speed increases the destruction of typhoons bringing us / and brings us heavier rains and stronger winds. People begin to buy out the supermarket / begin to stock up on supplies / begin to panic-buy supplies to avoid going out… you even can’t buy food through / using / on / with / via apps
Vocabulary
these days – now / past grammar
recently – past grammar
wait – just a minute / moment / hold on / just a secÂ
native company – domestic / local companyÂ
we need to depend on sth / rely on sth
stable – sth you can trust to always be the same
Grammar
from last job I know I can’t make a good product – from my last job I learned / found out / realised that I can’t make a good product
it’s very tired – it’s very tiringÂ
she needs to tell me something to do
I have done – includes now, it’s BEFORE NOW
I had done – doesn’t include now, it’s BEFORE another past time
eg. Before I heard about Firework, I hadn’t heard of a typhoon named firework.
we doesn’t need to buy – we don’t need / no one needs to buy
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