VIP Class Notes (Vicki)

A: Write about your favorite class and what do you like about it

My favorite school subject is music. Because I like to listen to the songs. But no one I like. In the class, we sing songs and listen to the songs. My music teacher is Miss Lu. She’s very beautiful. I like her very much.

Revised:
My favorite school subject is music. Because I like to listen to the songs. But no one I like. But no one song in particular. In the class, we sing songs and listen to the songs music. My music teacher is Miss Lu. She’s very beautiful. I like her very much.

One day Mr Bean saw there are lots of trashes on the road. And then he put the trashes in a pocket and then he saw lots of trashes again. After that he made a machine and put the trashes in the machine. At last the machine is exploded and then the trashes on the road again.

Revised:
One day Mr Bean saw that there are lots of trashes on the road. And then So he put the trashes in a pocket and then he saw lots of trashes again. After that he made a machine and put the trashes in the machine. At last the machine is exploded and then the trashes poured out on the road again.

An old woman go on trip. she said to Mr Bean to feed the little fish and then the cat wanted to catch the fish and then Mr Bean put the fish in his home. But the fish dropped into the toilet then the fish into the drain and Mr Bean go to the drain and found it. then the fish dropped in the river and a boy who was fishing found the fish and catch the fish and brought the fish in his home. and Mr Bean made a fish and put it in the boy’s home and hid the fish away. And then at last the old woman saw Mr Bean put his cat in a cage, she was angry.

Revised:
An old woman go went on a trip. She said to Mr Bean to feed the little fish and then the cat wanted to catch the fish. And then So Mr Bean put the fish in his home. But the fish dropped into the toilet then the fish into the drain and Mr Bean go went to the drain and found it. Then the fish dropped in the river and a boy who was fishing found the fish and catch caught the fish and brought the fish in his home. And Mr Bean made a fish and put it in the boy’s home and hid the fish away. And then at last the old woman saw Mr Bean put his cat in a cage, she was angry.

Write about your favorite book and tell me at least one exciting plot in the book