VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]
Homework
write about the training you had – think of an email topic – make it more formal.
Next Class Focus
focus on not using chinese but instead using simple english to explain things you don’t know
Writing exercise
Dear Tiffany,
Thank you for your email. I have checked the attachment. I think that Melody’s bonus for Q1 maybe incorrect. Please see the attachment in this email. The changes have been marked in red. Let me know if you have any questions.
Thanks
Regards
Shadow
Dear Tiffany,
Thank you for your email.
I have checked the attachment and / but I think that Melody’s bonus for Q1 may be incorrect. Please see the attachment in this email where / (Please) note that the changes have been marked in red.
Let me know if you have any questions. / should you have any questions, please let me know.
Thanks.
Regards,
Shadow
It is incorrect
It will be incorrect / it may be incorrect
Should I need to contact you, how can I reach you? – should = if
uni = all
form = the same / together
Example words
universe
unilateral
format
fill in a form
formulate
Grammar
there are not many people going / people who go to the mall
Vocabulary
sales way – sales channel / sales method
live-stream (v/n)
eg. I will live-stream tonight / I watched your live-stream
confident – zi xin
eg. I need to be confident when I live-stream
viewers (anything) / audience (tv / movie / performance) – people who watch sth
interact – communicate / touch / ask + answer questions
eg. when I live-stream i should interact with my viewers
animated – lots of movement / action
packages / package deal / set – products together you can buy cheaper
salary – money you get from your job
eg. my salary includes a bonus and commission
commission – money you get for each sale
eg. I get 10% commission from my sales
sales figure / numbers
eg. the figures are lower this year compared with last year
target – what you need to reach / hit
eg. our targets are the same this month as they were last month
deal with it (on a) case by case basis – decide based on each situation
再说 – let’s see / let’s wait and see / let’s see what happens / let’s see how it goes / let’s play it by ear
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