Online Class Notes (Lina) [W]
Grammar
I didn’t take my computer to thereĀ PhuketĀ / I didn’t bring my computer on the trip /
He late the time – He delayed the time
We flied to thereĀ PhuketĀ in the middle ofĀ the night Ā / We flew in the middle of the nightĀ
so he opened his eyes all the the night /so he had his eyes open all nightĀ
my son loves gun guns Ā / my son loves the gun (specific one)
the voice is loudly – the noice is loud / it makes a loud noice
The schedule is wasĀ imperfect / the schedule wasn’t perfectĀ
we found a boatĀ canĀ take us to the other island /we found a boat thatĀ could take us to the other island
I have been in thailand forĀ four times / I have been to thailand
I wantĀ to try this Ā / I wantedĀ to try thatĀ
he is talkingĀ Ā a story Ā – Ā he is telling a story
didn’t good at study – isn’t good at studyingĀ
e.g My son isn’t good at studying math nor languages.
I worried about his future (this is correct if past tense) Ā / I worry about his future / I am worried about his futureĀ
I speak to myself, why I can I not accept him in middle level Ā – I tell myself, why cant I accept I accept him to be a mid level student Ā / I tell myself, why cant I accept I accept him to be average
Vocabulary
collegurs Ā – colleagues [ Ā coll eeegs ]
e.g I have several colleagues Ā / My colleagues are very professional
e.g I have one colleague that I really like
Writing exercise
Last week I went to Phuket with my team. It was not a wonderful team activity. Because the arrangement was confused.
The first one is when our flight was arrived, we should take one bus to the hotel and this bus need go and back for 4 times.Ā
The second one is the company want to save money, so 3 days in Phuket we changed 2 hotels. When we left the first one hotel we need stay in the hotelās lobby to waiting the second hotelās bus for 2 hours. Itās all about the imperfect details.Ā
The third one is, we want to go to night market to have fun, but there were 8 people followed include my boss. I think it was not a good moment for show the other side for your boss.
I donāt like team activity, I think group activity should be in 4people. Because itās hard to take care of different peopleās idea. And I donāt like being late and waiting.
Revised
Last week I went to Phuket with my team. It was not a wonderful team activity, because the arrangement wasĀ confusing.
The first oneĀ issue wasĀ is when our flight arrived, and we should have taken one bus to the hotel all together,Ā butĀ insteadĀ this bus needed go and back forthĀ 4 times, which was inconvenient.Ā
The second issue is that the company want to save money, so for 3 days in Phuket we changed hotels twice. When we left the first hotel, we neededĀ to stay in the hotelās lobby, waiting for the second hotelās bus for 2 hours. Itās all about the imperfect details.
The third issue was that we want to go to the night market to have fun, but we were 8 people going including my boss. I think it was not a good wayĀ to show another side of ourselvesĀ toĀ our boss.
I donāt like teamĀ activities, I think group activities should be in 4people teams or less, Ā because itās hard to take care of so many different peopleās ideas, and I donāt like being late orĀ waiting around for otherĀ people.
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