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City cluster plans will accelerate elimination of hukou restrictions
Recently, the Nation Development and Reform Commission released a building opinion on how to cultivate metropolitan clusters. The stipulation requested the local government to try to remove the restriction of applying for a household registration, so that can provide a more conducive environment for talents and skill-workers nationwide. With the fierce fight for talents, more and more cities will earmark amount of money for constructing talent housing. The author predicts that quite a few cities will be reshuffled in the future.
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City cluster plans will accelerate elimination of hukou restrictions
Recently, the National Development and Reform Commission released a building (urban planning) opinion on how to cultivate metropolitan clusters. The stipulation requested that the local government to try to remove the restriction of applying for a household registration, so that [cities?**] can provide a more conducive environment for talents and skilled-workers nationwide. With the fierce fight for talent, more and more cities will earmark a large amount of / some money for constructing talent housing. The author predicts that quite a few cities will be reshuffled in the future.
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