VIP Class Notes (Whitney) [W]

Vocabulary

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psychology

Original
I usully took some mistakes for my travel. For example one time, My husband and I were needed to go to the Hong Kong. When I got to the Airport, I wanted show my passport to the customs, But I can’t found my passport. I was forgot to take it. So I needed back to home and then, came back to the Airport and took the next plane. My husband was waiting for me at Hong Kong Airport.

Another time, My husband and I were wanted to go back to my hometown. So we bought the train tickets

Corrected
I usually took make some mistakes when I for my travel. For example, one time my husband and I were needed to go to the Hong Kong. When I got to the Airport, I wanted to show my passport to the customs, but I couldn’t find my passport. I forgot to take it. So I needed to go back to home and then, came back to the Airport and took the next plane. My husband was waiting for me at Hong Kong Airport.

Another time, my husband and I were wantinged to go back to my hometown. So we bought the train tickets and went to the train station. When we sat down on our seats for a while. Two passengers came up to me and told me, sorry these are our seats. I took our my tickets and showed to them. The seat numbers didn’t weren’t wrong, but the date on the tickets was last week.