VIP Class Notes (Whitney) [S+W]

Correct the speech about Bio Oil and make it sound more fluent.

Vocabulary

content: 内容

What presentations have you given or will give? 

Next year’s promotion idea for Bio Oil – new product launch for a gel: pregnant women and skincare. We will spend most of the budget on launching the gel.

A lot of people are already familiar with Bio Oil but we will continue to create content to increase awareness and knowledge about the brand. We will continue to do so until the launch of our new product, gel.

a: conclude and invite questions
b: give the main part of your talk
c: greet the audience and thank them for coming
d: Introduce your talk
e: Introduce yourself
f: outline what you are going to say in your talk and suggest people leave their questions to the end
g: summarise the main points you have made.

Put the steps for structuring a presentation in order:
1. Greeting
2. Self Introduction
3. Talk Introduction
4. Outline + Suggest
5. Main Talk
6. Summarise
7. Conclude + Questions 

Follow the 7 steps of writing a presentation, and include the following information:
What is the product
What are the advantages of buying it
How is it marketed

Thanks for everybody who is coming for this meeting. I’m vikki who is the product manger of bio oil will introduce to you a new way to treat the dry skin today. If you have any question can ask me after I finish the presentation.

I think most of you who comes today heard about bio oil for a longtime. It’s a very famous oil which can care the skins and recover the stretch. 2019 bio oil will bring a new way to care dry skin, it’s a gel. The new product have 50% bio oil and many other good (ingredients/elements 成分) for skin. It’s really good for people who are work in a dry environment like captain , 空乘， farmer, swimming coach etc.

There is no similar product in the market. Company launched it in UK first, and sells very good. It broken down the normal imagine of gel and bring a new way to protect the skins.

We plan to launch it in sep. the season start to be dry …..

Above up is what we will do in the next year, and I do hope the gel sell well. And if you have any question can ask me now.

成分, 颜色质地, 使用感, 特殊, product comparison, 产品有什么好处, Bio Oil company information, 大小, 价格.