VIP Class Notes (Vicki)

Read “The Bluejay Tree”

mr bean, he teeth is loose and he is sad. he go to the bathroom brush teeth and he is hurt. he drink the salty water and he spits out the water. he eats the bread is hurt. he is go to the hospital. the doctor pulls his teeth off and doctor puts in a new one. and mr bean is happy. he see his toy dinosaur is broken. and he bites the dinosaur and his teeth is loose.

REVISED:
Mr Bean’s tooth is loose and he is sad. He goes to the bathroom and brushes his teeth. He feels hurt. He drinks the salty water and he spits out the water. He eats the bread and also feels hurt. He goes to the hospital and the doctor pulls his tooth out and puts in a new one. Mr Bean is happy. He sees his toy dinosaur is broken so he bites the dinosaur and his tooth is loose again. 

I see mr bean can see a cat is on the tree. its owner is sad. mr bean catches the cat. its owner is happy and owner invites mr bean to take a picture. mr bean is so happy and he hair is broken. mr bean is angry, he go to the hair salon and he cannot wait. he go to he home. he cuts his hair and he sad. he see a wig. he put the wig on his head. he is happy and he take a picture and he wig fly away. and he puts the cat on his head and people in the hair salon look the newspaper. he see the mr bean and people are go to the hair salon to change their hair.

REVISED:
I see that Mr Bean can see a cat in the tree. Its owner is sad. Mr Bean catches the cat and its owner is happy and invites him to take a picture. Mr Bean is so happy but his hair is messy. Mr Bean is angry and he goes to the hair salon. But there are so many people that he cannot wait. So he goes home and cuts his hair. But he cuts all of the hair and he is sad. He sees a wig and he puts the wig on his head. He is happy and he takes a picture. But the wig flies away so he puts the cat on his head. People in the hair salon sees the newspaper and sees Mr Bean. They all go to the hair salon to change their hair.