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Homework


What do you think is the next frontier for compute science?

Next Class Focus

practice presenting in English

Speaking exercise

I am ready to do a Ph.D so because of the covid 19 the embassy closed and had to defer my admission date.
I should have come to the US this year so I had to gap half a year.
During this time I think I want to improve my language skills and improve my reading and listening and speaking abilities.
I recognized Jesse on the Tik Tok.
My major is computer science in information but I major in electronic engineering in my master degree

My advisor told me I need to do presentations because they offered me teaching assistantship. I have to lead the class and grade papers for the students.
I still want to improve my speaking English. My speaking English is important to help me adapt.

I think the days of elections is a very important day because all the policies will be decided

about the papers I have write

I will give some feedback what I have done with my research direction.

my judgement may not be the correct


I am ready to do a Ph.D however because of Covid 19/ due to the coronavirus/pandemic the embassy closed and I had to defer/postpone my admission date.
I should have moved  to the US this year so I had to gap half a year.
During this time I think I want to improve my language skills and improve my reading and listening and speaking abilities.
I recognized Jesse on the Tik Tok.
My major is computer science & information but I majored in electronic engineering in my master degree

My advisor told me I need to do/deliver presentations because they offered me teaching assistantship. I have to lead the class and grade papers for the students.
I still want to improve my spoken/oral English. Oral English is important to help me adapt / will be crucial in my integration.
I think the election date  is a very important day because all the policies will be decided / we may see a policy shift depending on the result.

Presentations would be about the papers I have write
I will give some feedback about what I have done  / and  my research direction. / I will have regular advancement meetings with my advisor

my judgement may not be correct  / the correct one

you just have 5 mins to fill the tank  ( talk about a limitation . you cannot take more than more 5 mins. you have to hurry)

it just takes 5 mins to fill the tank (simple observation)

Pronunciation

policy

Writing exercise

As far as I am concerned, the founder of Tesla Musk is the most significant entrepreneur in 20 century. What he has done is not only to make a great progress in renew-energy vehicles, but also invent some sophisticated devices which could change our life.

Tesla vehicles is changing the ways of travelling. Compared with traditional vehicles using gas and fuel, renew-energy vehicles do not emit toxic gas and carbon dioxide which plays the main role of global warming. Also, the running cost of renew-energy vehicles is lower than the combustible engine. According to statistics from China Association of Automobile Manufacturers, it costs only 20 yuan for renew-energy vehicles to drive 200 kilometres. However, it costs 50 yuan or so for traditional vehicles to drive the same distance. It has to be noticed that driving the renew-energy vehicles will provide better user experience than driving the traditional vehicles. Although there are several vehicle manufacturers producing their own renew-energy vehicles, Tesla is the most impressive and has the highest market share over the world. Moreover, Elton Musk plans to disclose all the cutting edge techniques of batteries in the near future.

Elton Musk and his research team also started the business in aerospace industry. In the past, the aerospace industry is basically monopolized by the military and government. As a result, exploring the outer space is very expensive. However, Musk make it available for civil use. He founded a company named X-space which focused on exploration of outer space. It develops the cheaper spacecraft and recycled engine which makes it possible for ordinary people travel in the space.

Recently, Musk announced that they had invented a device called brain interface. His team did a series of experiments in pigs’ brain. The device is embedded in pigs’ brain and researcher can fell the emotional mental of pigs by the device. Further, they can also control the feeling of the pigs by sending microwave through the device. In fact, the device will have a great prospect in medical health. In the near future, doctor could use it to solve some diseases about motor nerve impairment.

As stated in the previous paragraphs, Musk contributes a lot to this society. He is not a businessman, but is more like a scientist. What makes me impressive is that his attitude towards the business. He said what he had done for this world had nothing to do with making money but changing the lifestyle of humanity.

you just have 5 mins to fill the tank  ( talk about a limitation . you cannot take more than more 5 mins. you have to hurry)

it just takes 5 mins to fill the tank (simple observation)


As far as I am concerned, the founder of Tesla Elon Musk is the most significant entrepreneur in the 20th century. What he has done is not only to make a great progress in renewable-energy vehicles / electric vehicle, but also invent some sophisticated devices which could change our life.

Tesla vehicles are changing transportation / are changing the way we get around. / the way we commute.
Compared with traditional vehicles using gasoline , renewable-energy vehicles do not emit toxic gas and carbon dioxide which plays the main role in global warming./ which are the main cause of global warming / one of the main factors in global warming

Also, the running cost of renewable-energy vehicles is lower than the combustible engine. According to statistics from China Association of Automobile Manufacturers, it costs only 20 yuan for renewable-energy vehicles to drive 200 kilometres. However, it costs 50 yuan or so for traditional vehicles to drive the same distance. It has to be noticed that driving the renewable-energy vehicles will provide a better user experience than driving traditional vehicles.
Although there are several vehicle manufacturers producing their own renewable-energy vehicles, Tesla is the most impressive and has the highest market share over the world. Moreover, Elton Musk plans to share all advances they achieved in batteries technology in the near future.

Elton Musk and his research team also operate in the aerospace industry. In the past, the aerospace industry was basically monopolized by the military and the government / was a restricted industry.
As a result, exploring the outer space is very expensive. However, Musk makes it available for civil use. He founded a company named spaceX which focuses on exploration of outer space. It develops cheaper spacecraft and recycles engine which makes it possible for ordinary people to travel to space.

Recently, Musk announced that they had invented a device called neuralink . His team did a series of experiments on pigs’ brain. The device is embedded in pigs’ brain and researcher can feel the emotional mental state of pigs through the device. Further, they can also control the feelings of the pigs by sending microwave through the device. In fact, the device will have a great prospect in medical health. In the near future, doctor could use it to solve some diseases about motor nerve impairment.

As stated in the previous paragraphs, Musk contributes a lot to society. He is not a businessman, but is more like a scientist. What makes me impressed/ what impresses me / the most impressive is his attitude towards the business. He said what he had done for this world had nothing to do with making money but changing the lifestyle of humanity.

Vocabulary

space (without any article) = galaxy
I went to space

space (with article) = room space
the space between the door and the window is too small

charging station (n) : place where you can charge
It is hard to find charging stations for Tesla cars

run the market : be big enough to create trends in a market
google runs the search market

Grammar

if you open too much websites -> too many (websites are countable)

can I count 1,2,3… if yes -> countable (use many)
I have many phones

if not -> uncountable (use much)
I don’t have much energy

you do not use the together with a name but you use the with a noun
I went to the hospital
I went to Huashan hospital
I travelled to China
I travelled to the United Kingdom
I travelled to England

use come when talking people going where you currently are
I am in SH and my friends will come to SH next month

when talking about moving to another place do not use come
I will move/go/travel to the US next year.

something is impressive

I am impressed