VIP Class Notes (Tibo) [S+W]

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active / passive voice

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Speaking exercise

in 2016 I lost my job for about 9 months.
It is a dark period
at that time time I was in a start up and I have been laid off by company.
I thought I could find a good job in a few time but actually no.
so I had almost 30 or 40 interview in 9 months all of them bad news.

I got my new offer by the recommend of my best friend to have interview of Honeywell.
At that time I thought a lot of my experience what I got and have some learnings from some failures of the past 30 to 40 interview so be better and better.

Once a female HR always asked have you already married, do you want to have kids in the future.
It is very normal but I don’t think it is polite.

some HR they try to ask kind of questions in another way. it is not fair to the female.


in 2016 I lost my job and was unemployed for about 9 months.
It was a dark period/ time.
at that time I was in a start up and I was laid off by company.
I thought I could find a good job in a short time /quickly but actually not.
so I had almost 30 or 40 interviews in 9 months all of them ended with bad news. / were unfruitful

I got a new offer from the recommendation of my best friend to have an interview with Honeywell.

At that time I thought highly about a lot of my experience what I got and had/received some learnings from some failures of the past 30 to 40 interviews so it went better and better.

Once a female HR asked me several times are you already married, do you want to have kids in the future.
It is very normal but I don’t think it is polite. / I think it is out of place / not appropriate.

some HR try to ask  these kind of questions in another way/ in an implicit way. it is not fair to women.

Vocabulary

implicit (adj) : which is understood based on the situation / context
The gangster told his men “Tom is a problem, I want the problem to disappear” , he told his men to kill Tom in an implicit way.

explicit (adj) : which is understood exactly at face value / as it is said
The gangster told his men “I want you to kill Tom” , he told his men to kill Tom in an explicit way.

implicitly / explicitly (adv)
Our boss implicitly told us to lie about our data.

think highly: think very good things about / admire
I think highly of Tom, he has been the star employee for the past 2 years.

to recommend (v)
I was recommended by a friend

recommandation (n)
I had the recommendation of a friend

recommendation letter : letter from your old boss saying how awesome you are
I wrote my own recommendation letter.

fruitful (adj) : producing good results / productive
Learning new media marketing was fruitful because it helped me find a new job in a douyin advertising company.

unfruitful (adj) : not producing good results
I did so many unfruitful things when I was young, I wasted a lot of time.

unemployment(n) : situation of not having a job
Unemployment increased because of the virus

superstitious (adj)迷信的
People get more superstitious as they get older or richer.

superstition (n) 
There is a superstition that a black cat brings bad luck

overwhelm (v) being buried under something big in size / something too big in size to handle / often used with emotions
I was overwhelmed with sadness when my grandpa died
the unemployment call center was overwhelmed after the outbreak of the virus
Our success was so overwhelming that we had to ramp up/increase production

according to Tom : from Tom’s opinion
According to Tom, AI will bring a new revolution

Grammar

active voice: someone does something -> include responsibility
Tom opened the door
Jerry made a mistake

passive voice: something is done (by someone) -> avoid responsibility / show power -> interdiction
The door was opened (by Tom)
A mistake was made ( you don’t mention Jerry’s name)
Smoking is forbidden
3 situations in which a passive makes sense:
– interdiction (Smoking is forbidden)
– avoid responsibility -> (a mistake was made ) (this way colleagues won’t hate you)
– result is more important than action ( a Covid 19 vaccine was discovered)

if you don’t have a subject -> create a general one
a discovery was made (passive)
-> create a general subject
scientists made a discovery

We reduced poverty from 2010 to 2019

Writing exercise

Dear Mr. Pahl:
Thank you for your reply.
To the EC flag shop of T-mall/JD, we have to do the visual design operation which relate to the promotion such as “618, 11.11,”, etc. The promotion information, benefits and price need to be changed on the product banners, ec product pages, ads banners; Besides that, the daily flag shop visual maintenance is also necessary.

According to the Question 1:
Optimizing CPC/CPM of advertising banners is our next step but need to try and test banners to optimize CTR&CPC.
Question 2:
It is necessary to choose a professional retainer who had rich experience and strong capability in EC area. Last vendor “英赛” who is good at digital Marketing but not EC area that cause the inefficiency and high communication cost.
Compared with last vendor, the new vendor(Baozun 博道) we chose is good at EC operation including the visual design for flag shop maintenance and promotions. 博道 is also service for the clients for Phillips, Brita, Panasonic, etc.

Thank you,

Best Regards,
Jenny


Dear Mr. Pahl:
Thank you for your reply.
To the EC flag shop of T-mall/JD, we have to do the visual design operation which relates to the promotion such as “618, 11.11,”, etc.
We need to change the product banner….(active)
/The promotion information, benefits and price need to be changed on the product banners, ec product pages, ads banners; Besides (that), the daily flag shop visual maintenance is also necessary.

regarding Question 1: / regarding your first question :
Optimizing CPC/CPM of advertising banners is our next step but we need to try and test banners to optimize CTR&CPC.

Question 2:
It is necessary to choose a professional retainer who has rich experience and strong capability in EC area. Our last vendor “英赛” was strong in digital Marketing but weak in EC area that causes inefficiencies / it results in inefficiencies  and high communication cost. / with a vendor with a stronger experience in EC we could increase efficiency and work faster.

Compared with the last vendor, the new vendor(Baozun 博道) we chose is good at EC operation including the visual design for flag shop maintenance and promotions. 博道 is also servicing/ also services for the clients of Phillips, Brita, Panasonic, etc.

Thank you,

let me know if you have any questions,

Best Regards,
Jenny

use strong / weak to talk about experience
Our marketing company is strong in automotive, we have worked with most of the car manufacturers .

Pronunciation

unemployed (say n m ploy D)