VIP Class Notes (Rebekah) S + V

In this class, Hades told me a story about his dream life, including having robot clothes and sleeping on the moon and spending a night on the Great Wall of China. Living in a sandcastle on an island and an igloo.

I like to draw many things, including houses and cars.

On the weekend, I play with my brother, my brother is 4 years old.

[Hades telling me a story about his dreams for the future]

I can fly in the sky and have robot clothes, i have drawing on my clothes and its very colorful and beautiful, in rainbow colors. The clothes help me swim in the sea, and it can give you food. It has many arms and it has a box on my back, and in the box there is many food and I can eat my best foods. In the evening, I will fly in the sky and sleep on the moon. I can see many stars, and my robot clothes has another box, it has a pillow and I can sleep on it.  On the morning, I will go to the beach, because it has a very fast, it has four wheels on my legs, so it is very fast, so I will go to the sea and I will see the sun, its very beautiful and big and in the afternoon I will go home and eat some food and drawing some pictures. And I will color the clouds. And in the evening I will go in the sea and see many fish, my robot clothes has two lights on my shoulders. I can see starfish, I can the shark, I am scared, but my robot clothes are hard so you the shark can’t eat me. I can also see seagrass, in the seagrass I can find some beautiful and expensive, beautiful shells. Other people can buy the things I found and then I have money. Then I can buy many toys to play. I would share my money with my brother, my mother and my father. At night I will sleep in the sky, I will sleep on the moon or on the stars or on a cloud. I like sleep on a clouds because its very soft. I can fly with my robot. I can make another robot clothes. My friends all have robot clothes.  If a person like my robot clothes, and if he want me to make it, I will make it for him. And I don’t go to school, I don’t be late because my robot clothes are fast. I will buy clothes with my money. I like to buy very special clothes. My favorite color is blue. I also like yellow because it shines. I fly to the mountains and I fly to another country to see very famous things.  I want to see Great Wall. In my dream the tower is very long and tall and I can sleep on it. I will stand very high and see many mountains. My robot clothes will make food for me. I will see Shanghai Tower, the tallest Shanghai Tower.  I will go in the Shanghai Tower and see the city. I will sleep on it. The robot clothes is very strong and protective. I want to Iceland so I can play in the sand. My robot clothes will help me make big sandcastles, its very big, so big I can live in the sandcastle. Coconuts are very good. My robot clothes can make another food. I like to eat noodles. I like eat dumplings. I like to eat candles. I like to eat chocolate and ice cream. I like to eat tomato pizza. I want to the north, there is many snow, and I can make a igloo and I can live in the igloo.I can white bears, polar bears and can see sea lion. And I will give the sea lion a ball for them to play and I can see the dolphins jump, very high. I sea many penguins, some are small and big. Sometimes the penguins go into the water to catch fish. My robot clothes has a screen, so I can call my friends, and I will tell him to come with me, because he also has robot clothes, so I am never clothes. My friend’s English is Rubber. Rubber wants to go to the beach and live in my sandcastle. He likes cold place but also hot places. We like skating and skiing, swimming, scuba diving, flying. I have a pet giraffe. I ride my giraffe, its name is Happy. Happy has some friends, one is a bird, and the bird can fly. And Happy’s second friend is a zebra, because their are many stripes on the zebra’s body. The giraffe has many spots on its body. They are friends because they are very different. I will ride the zebra sometimes. The zebra’s name is Blue. Blue is very very fast, and sometimes Happy and Blue have competitions for who is more fast. Who is faster? Happy is faster than Blue. They eat grass and leaves. They are vegetarian.

Revised

I like to draw many things, including houses and cars. On the weekend, I play with my brother, my brother is 4 years old.

[Hades telling me a very interesting story about his dreams for the future]

My dream is that I can fly in the sky and have wear robot clothes. I have special designs drawing on my clothes and its they are very colorful and beautiful, in rainbow colors. The robot clothes help me swim in the sea, and it can also provide me with give you food. The clothes have has many arms and they also have a box on my back, and in the box there is many types of food and I can always eat my best favorite foods.

In the evening, I will fly in/through the sky and sleep on the moon. I can see many stars, and my robot clothes also have has another box, it has a pillow in it and I can sleep on it (the pillow).  On the morning, I will go to the beach, because I can go it has a very fast, it [the robot outfit] has four wheels on my legs, so it helps me to go is very fast. Then, I will go to the sea and I will see the sun: it is very beautiful and big. And in the afternoon, I will go home and eat some food and drawing some pictures. And I will color/draw the clouds.

And in the evening, I will go/dive into the sea and see many fish. Even though it is very dark, my robot clothes has have two lights on my shoulders, to help me see underwater. I can see starfish, I can see the sharks, I am scared, but my robot clothes are hard and strong so the shark can’t eat me. I can also see seagrass, in the seagrass I can find some beautiful and expensive beautiful shells. I sell the shells so other people can buy the beautiful things I found. And then I have my own money. Then I can buy many toys to play with. I would share my money with my brother, my mother and my father.

At night, I will sleep in the sky.  I will sleep on the moon or on the stars or on a cloud. I like to sleep on a clouds because its very soft. I can fly with my robot clothes./My robot clothes allow me to be able to fly. I can make another set of robot clothes. I gave all my friends all have robot clothes.  If a person likes my robot clothes, and if he wants me to make it for him, I will make it for him. And I don’t go to school, but if I did, I would never don’t be late because my robot clothes are fast.

I will buy clothes with my money. I like to buy very special clothes. My favorite color is blue. I also like yellow because it shines. I fly to the mountains and I fly to another other countries to see very famous things.  I want to see the Great Wall. In my dream the tower is very long and tall and I can sleep on it. I will stand very high and see many mountains. My robot clothes will make food for me. I will see Shanghai Tower, the tallest building in Shanghai.  I will go in the Shanghai Tower and see the view of the city. I will sleep on it. The robot clothes is are very strong and protective.

I went to an island Iceland so I can play in the sand. My robot clothes will help me make big sandcastles, its very big, so big I can live in the sandcastle. The Coconuts on the island are very good. My robot clothes can make another many kinds of food. I like to eat noodles. I like to eat dumplings. I like to eat candles candies. I like to eat chocolate and ice cream. I like to eat tomato pizza/pizza with tomato sauce/Margarita pizza. I went to the north, where there is a lot of many snow, and I can make an igloo and I can live in the igloo. I can see white bears (polar bears) and can see sea lions. And I will give the sea lion a ball for them to play with and I can see the dolphins jump very high. I see many penguins, some are small and some are big. Sometimes the penguins go into the water to catch fish. My robot clothes has have a screen, so I can call my friends, and I will tell him to come with me, because he also has robot clothes, so I am never lonely. My friend’s English name is “Rubber”. Rubber wants to go to the beach and live in my sandcastle. He likes cold place but also hot places. We like skating and skiing, swimming, scuba diving and flying. I have a pet giraffe. I ride my giraffe, it’s name is Happy. Happy has some friends, one is a bird, and the bird can fly. And Happy’s second friend is a zebra, because their are they have many stripes on the zebra’s body. The giraffe has many spots on its body. They are friends because they are very different. I will ride the zebra sometimes. The zebra’s name is “Blue”. Blue is very very fast, and sometimes Happy and Blue have competitions for to see who is more fast. Who is faster? Happy is faster than Blue. They eat grass and leaves. They are vegetarian.

Vocabulary

Vegetarian (noun): Someone who only vegetables, but never eats meat.
eg. Happy and Blue only eat grass and leaves, so they are vegetarian.

Carnivore (noun): Someone who eats meat, not just vegetables.
eg. Hades is a carnivore, because he eats chicken. He also eats beef.

Pork (noun): Meat from a pig, pork is ham and bacon.
eg. Hades is not sure he likes pork.

Oyster (noun): A type of seafood that is in a shell. Inside is a grey, soft food. Also oysters make pearls.
eg. Not many kids like to eat oysters, but many adults think eating oysters is very special.

Mussel: Another type of seafood that is in a shell.
eg. Hades is not sure he has eaten mussels before, but he would like to try.