VIP Class Notes (Raph)[W][S]

Vocabulary

Coach (n): 1-  someone whose job is to teach people to improve at a sport, skill, or school subject. 2- someone whose job is to train and organize a sports team.
E.g.: He was my tennis coach in high school.
E.g.: The former football player Zidane is now Real Madrid’s coach.

Autograph (n): 1- the signature of a famous person.
E.g.: After the concert, the singer signed autographs to his fans.
E.g.: He was too shy to ask for her autograph.

Capital (n): 1- the city where a country’s government is.
E.g.: Madrid is the capital of Spain.
E.g.: Beijing is the capital of China.

Funny (adj): 1- something that makes you laugh.
E.g.: Do you know any funny jokes?
E.g.: She is very funny.
E.g.: This is a really funny movie.

Fun (adj): 1- something that makes you happy or that is nice and enjoyable to do.
E.g.: Playing football is fun!
E.g.: There are lots of fun things to do here.

Original:

I have been learning foot ball for 4 years in my school and I started learning it when I was in grade two. and I will finish it many years later. May be I will be a good football player in the future. From grade two to grade four I was the defender and in grade five I was the goalkeeper. Yesterday my family was invited to have a football camp and my football teacher is very good which is from Hotspur team’s best teacher and they teach me two days and at last I got their signature.

Edited:

I have been learning football for 4 years at school. I started learning it when I was in grade two and I plan to keep learning for many years. Maybe I will be a good football player in the future. From grade two to grade four I was the defender and in grade five I was the goalkeeper. Last week my family was invited to a football camp. My football coaches, who are from the Hotspur team, are very good. They taught me for two days and in the end I got their signatures/autographs.

Original:

In Minecraft there are many types. You can build buildings, or you can to alive in this world. There were many creatures in this game. Some are very strong, some are big, some are small, some are good, some are bad. I like to alive in the game. I think it’s funnier than build buildings. The place I alive in no any buildings. It only has some little village and boss castle. It’s fun to live there because we can alive in there and also you build buildings.

Edited:

There are different ways of playing Minecraft. You can build buildings, or you can create a character to live in this world. There are also many creatures in the game. Some are very strong, some are big, some are small, some are good, and some are bad. I prefer to just create characters and live in the game, because I think that is more fun than building buildings. The place / map I live in on the game doesn’t have a lot of buildings, only some little villages and a boss‘ castle. Minecraft is fun because we can live as characters in it and also build things.

Grammar

In Asphalt 8 you can use car to broke other people’s cars. – In Asphalt 8 you can use your car to break / to crash into other people’s cars.